dear diary,
today i saw our returning gods, i am very happy about this sudden event. And i saw our gods riding on giant dear. unfortunately we have been forced to sacrifice some of our men for our religion. also i saw great big fire sticks that can kill human. some of our people have begun to be traitors and take our gold. today also the spanish have stolen our gold they are thieves and maliche is a traitor devil and a whore
25/50 - This has some good detail but there is no organisation and you do not really follow the guidelines. This is supposed to be a diary entry and not a collection of facts.
ReplyDeleteT - work on following instructions.